The First Part Last by Angela Johnson

Johnson, A. (2003). The first part last. New York: Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers.  

Bobby is a teenage father living in New York City.  He tells his story of life with his newborn daughter Feather and the countless ways that his life is transformed by her existence.  The responsibility of caring for a child at such a young age while still balancing school, family, friends, and decisions about the future is daunting, but Bobby is determined to make the right decisions for his daughter and their future together.

            The novel begins just a few days after Bobby brings Feather home from the hospital.  The chapters alternate between the first few months of her life and flashback descriptions that begin with the day that Bobby’s girlfriend Nia tells him of her pregnancy.  The two timelines blend to create a story that keeps the reader engaged.  Although it’s obvious in one sense where the “Then” chapters are leading since the reader knows from the “Now” story line that Bobby is raising Feather with support but little direct assistance from his parents, it becomes clear early in the novel that both timelines are building towards a climax that the reader may not expect.  The narrative style is episodic in nature, describing key events that lead to future consequences as well as conversations, interactions, or reflections that are representative of the relationships among the characters.  

            Bobby’s narrative voice seems authentic, conveying the fear and confusion alongside his determination and love for his daughter.  He is frank about the realities he faces in raising a child alone, conveying both the resentment he secretly feels about losing his own childhood and the tender devotion and amazement he feels at Feather’s existence.  The novel reads a bit like poetry.  The language is sparse in places but very powerful and descriptive.

            There is foreshadowing leading up to the conclusions of both timelines that connect then and now into one linear story, but Bobby’s final decision about his and Feather’s future may still seem shocking or even unrealistic to readers, especially after the realistic way that Bobby has been portrayed throughout most of the book.  Eve with this slightly incongruous ending, the result  

is a powerful novel.

Where Things Come Back

I enjoyed Where Things Come Back so much that I decided to make it the subject of my book trailer assignment for this class.  One of the requirements was to incorporate spoken narration as well as text.  I hate the sound of my recorded voice so much, I seriously considered hiring someone to do it.  In the end, it's my voice saying "Welcome to Lily, Arkansas."

Where Things Come Back by John Corey Whaley

Whaley, J. C. (2011). Where things come back. New York: Atheneum Books for Young Readers.

The small town of Lily, Arkansas is situated halfway between Little Rock and Memphis and is the sort of place that people dream of leaving.  The summer before his senior year of high-school, Cullen Witter witnesses people coming to Lily instead of leaving.  An alleged sighting of the Lazarus woodpecker thought to be extinct for seventy years brings notoriety to Cullen’s hometown.  The woodpecker becomes a symbol for second chances to the people of Lily and the bird enthusiasts who flock there, but when Cullen’s younger brother Gabriel disappears without a trace one night, his family and friends are left hopeless, desperately in need of a second chance. 

Whaley’s novel is rooted in a real place and time.  The ivory-billed woodpecker, long thought to be extinct, was spotted in the Big Woods region of Arkansas in 2004, and its existence  has been the subject of debate among ornithologists for the past several years.  Teens in Arkansas, especially in the central and delta areas surrounding the Big Woods will be old enough to remember the extensive news coverage surrounding the bird as well as the locally-published children’s books such as Big Woods Bird (Luneau & Bennett, 2005) that were distributed in classrooms across the state.  While the story of Gabriel’s disappearance and the Witter family’s struggle to deal with the loss is the true focal point of the novel, the woodpecker subplot is woven throughout and comes to have great significance in Cullen’s recollections of that summer.  Readers familiar with Arkansas may also appreciate the many geographic names from around the state that are used as character names throughout the novel. 

Interspersed with the chapters narrated by Cullen, are sections told from a third-person point of view that introduce the character Benton Sage, a young missionary in Ethiopia and later a college student in Georgia.  His experiences and relationship with his roommate Cabot Searcy at first appear to be completely unrelated to the events unfolding in Lily, but the author eventually weaves these two story lines together through some surprising twists and turns.  Benton and Cabot both demonstrate the same single-minded passion and pursuit of goals that characterizes the zealous woodpecker-seekers in Arkansas, and their particular interest in biblical texts and apocrypha connects to the other storyline through the name of the woodpecker.  Of course, there is no Lazarus woodpecker, the name is an allusion to the biblical story of one who returns from the dead, underlining the hope and belief in second chances that the bird represents to the town. 

Although the novel is has a realistic setting and plot, Cullen’s narration often turns fanciful with extended descriptions of his zombie-filled daydreams and nightmares as well as his notations of amusing book title ideas he records in his journal.  Although these elements provide some humor, it can sometimes be a little tricky for the reader to determine where reality ends and fantasy begins.

Small town life is authentically portrayed as are the teen characters of Cullen, his best friend Lucas, and the various friends, enemies, and love interests Cullen describes.  The descriptions of how each family member and close friend deals with Gabriel’s disappearance as well as Cullen’s perception of how the town bears with them through the loss are vivid and realistic.  Readers who have experienced tragedy or loss will appreciate how the narrative demonstrates the duality of time marching onward and standing still.  Although the subject matter is serious and the emotional descriptions haunting, Whaley provides moments of humor and levity that seem to mimic the ups and downs of real life.

References

Luneau, T. R., & Bennett, T. (2005). Big Woods bird: An ivory-bill story. Little Rock, AR: Kury Lane Inc.

            

Speak by Laurie Halse Anderson

Anderson, L. H. (1999). Speak. New York: Farrar Straus Giroux.

Melinda Sordino enters the ninth grade “clanless,” without a group of friends to define her identity.  Her former friends shun her, and when she does draw the notice of teachers or other students, it’s the wrong kind of attention.  She withdraws into her own haunting thoughts, burying her pain in long silences and a year-long art assignment that will push her to deal with the tumultuous memories that plague her.

Despite the fact that it was written over a decade ago, the subject matter of Speak could have been inspired by much more recent headlines:  a teenage girl, drunk at a party, a victim of sexual assault at the hands of a popular athlete.  The only difference in Melinda’s story and the real-life tragedies that have made news in the past few years is that there’s no social media to testify to what happens to her.  Her rape is a closely guarded secret—one that she manages to compartmentalize and keep even from herself much of the time, yet she is still criminalized by peers who don’t know the whole story.  Melinda is left to deal with the emotional fallout of her ordeal on her own.          

Although Melinda stops communicating with her parents, teachers, and classmates, her first person narration of the story is highly descriptive, full of evocative imagery and perceptive observation of the people and events around her.  Her thoughts and judgments of others are sometimes biting in their sarcasm, but this trait lends an authentic teenage voice to the narration.  The realism, raw emotion, and feelings of powerlessness that Melinda expresses will likely find a ready audience with teenagers who can often feel marginalized and silenced due to parents, teachers, and peers who do not understand or provide support to their inner struggles.

Throughout the novel, Melinda must endure encounters with her attacker who goes to her school, and while he seems to taunt her through these interactions, it’s somewhat unclear whether this is Melinda’s perception or what’s actually happening between them.  A final confrontation near the end of the book brings them face to face once again and seems to reveal her adversary as a person who displays every confidence that he will continue to get away with his abusive treatment of girls.  While it is easy to sympathize and relate to Melinda, even for people who have not experienced a similar trauma, the antagonist and his actions seem almost too horrible to be believed.  Perhaps his character is just as realistic as the others in the story, but the way he maneuvers himself into his final scene with Melinda seems just a little far-fetched.

The difficult subject matter have made this novel the target of challenges and attempted censorship, but the realistic portrayal of the cruelties of high school and adolescence along with the ultimately hopeful message provide ample cause to keep this book on library shelves and easily accessible to teen readers.           

I Am the Cheese by Robert Cormier

Cormier, R. (1977). I am the cheese. New York: Knopf.

The story of Adam Farmer begins when he sets out on a bicycle trip from Monument, Massachusetts, to Rutterburg, Vermont to see his father.  Along the way, he encounters dangers of the road, some of his worst fears, and a few helping hands.  Interspersed with Adam’s first person account of his journey and his recollections of happier times are transcripts of interviews between Adam and Brint, a doctor who is trying to help Adam regain his memories.  Through their conversations and Adam’s trip narrative, the clues about Adam’s family and past unravel. 

            The multiple points of view to which the reader has access through Adam’s travel narrative, the interview transcripts, and the third person descriptions of some of Adam’s memories that are recalled during the interview sessions highlight the unreliability of Adam as a narrator while leaving clues and foreshadowing for the reader to solve the mystery of the Farmer family.  Multiple viewpoints or shifts in narration from first to third person may be more common in contemporary young adult literature, but for its time, this was a likely an innovative literary device.  The  events of the story also cast doubts upon certain aspects of the government in a move that mimics the trends in adult literature of the same time and is a precursor to conspiracy theories and exposés that abound in popular fiction (and nonfiction) today.

            Like so many other young adult novels that have remained perennial favorites among both teens and the teachers and librarians who recommend and advocate for them, I Am the Cheese is a story of seeking out identity.  In Adam’s case, this may be a more literal quest than other works, but the story is told in such a way that even if teens cannot relate to the specific circumstances of Adam’s life, they will connect to his exploration of memories as he tries to piece together and explain his life.  The mystery and adventure of his bike trip will also likely resonate with readers who are eager to gain independence from home and family while the treatment of Adam’s many fears along the way can be viewed as reassuring or affirming to readers who may be dealing with their own fears and insecurities about growing up, changing relationships, and identity.  I believe that the accessibility of the teen characters of Adam and Amy in the book and these themes of identity, insecurity, and independence are the greatest strengths of the novel.  As someone who reads a great deal of young adult literature, I can see the influence of Cormier’s writing and characters in the writing of more contemporary realistic fiction.  As I read, I noticed several instances or descriptions that will make this novel seem dated to today’s young readers.  Adam has to use pay phones in his attempts to contact his friend Amy along his journey, and during one of the calls, the operator cuts in to speak to him.  Although I can recall a time before cell phones when pay phones were a necessary part of life, but today’s teens will have little or no reference for this plot point.  Some of the literary and musical references will be similarly outside the experience of current readers.  This could be perceived as a drawback to some teens who aren’t interested in outdated references in books or movies, but the overall strength of the characters, plot, and theme of the story ultimately outweigh this drawback. 

            

The Palm of my Heart edited by Davida Adedjouma

Adedjouma, Davida. 1996. The palm of my heart: poetry by African American children. Ill. by R. Gregory Christie. New York: Lee & Low Books. ISBN 9781880000410

This collection of poems, a Coretta Scott King Award winner, contains poetry written by African American children as a part of an enrichment program taught by editor Adedjouma.  Each poem begins with the words "Black is . . ." and expresses the young poets' thoughts or experiences concerning race and skin color and identity.  Although each poem begins with the same words, the variety of ideas, themes, and nuances are varied and insightful.  Imagery and word choice are used to convey strong emotions.

While this collection would be inspiring for any young poets, it is a powerful resource for African American students who too often do not hear from writers who look like them or share their experiences.  Not only are the poets published in this volume African American, they are all young people ranging from eight to fourteen years old at the time of publication.To read and experience poetry from children their own age is a valuable experience for young readers and writers.  The illustrations have an appealing style and again feature African American faces that complement the poems.  Each young poet is described in a brief biography at the end of the book.

Featured poem:

Black is dark,

dark is lovely,

lovely is the palm of my heart

and my heartbeats are filled with joy.

by Felicia Renee Brazil

As a way of introducing the poem, I would probably share with students some background about the poetry collection--that the poems were written by students near their own age and that each poet began with the same two words but created a variety of moods, thoughts, and expressions from those two words.  After reading this poem, I would ask the students to discuss the emotions that the poet associates with black and possibly compare it to another poem from the collection.

I would next ask the students to brainstorm to find one unifying characteristic that they all share that could serve as a opening line for a set of poems inspired by the concept of this book.

A Poke in the I selected by Paul B Janeczko

Janeczko, Paul B. 2001. A poke in the I. Ill. by Chris Raschka. Cambridge, MA: Candlewick Press. ISBN 9780763606619

Janeczko has selected thirty previously published concrete poems for this collection illustrated by Chris Raschka.  The variety and visual interest of these poems set this volume apart.  The artwork complements and adds interest and meaning to the unique shapes and forms of the poems.  Rather than relying on the imagery of the words alone, the poems represent and depict movement, shape, and meaning in many ways.  Most of the poems are very brief in word count, but rely heavily on sight and sound to convey meaning and engage interest.

The volume features a variety of poets (including one previously unpublished poem by the illustrator Raschka) with multiple poems by Robert Froman, Douglas Florian, and John Hollander.  While the poems vary greatly in length, complexity, and tone, they are connected by the interactive nature of the visual representations.  The poems and illustrations form one cohesive unit that will appeal to a broad range of abilities, interest levels, and moods of children. Janeczko provides an editor's note to help introduce and explain the idea of concrete poetry.  Several of the poems are grouped on a spread with poems of similar theme or meaning which adds continuity to the collection as a whole, and a table of contents provides access points to the various poems.

Featured poem:

"Popsicle" by Joan Bransfield Graham

Popsicle

Popsicle

tickle

tongue fun

licksicle

sticksicle

please

don't run

dripsicle

slipsicle

melt, melt

tricky

stopsicle

plopsicle

hand all

s

t

i

c

k

y

As it is printed in the book, the poem takes on the shape of a popsicle with all lines except the last word forming a rectangle of text and "sticky" written downward on the page to form the stick of the popsicle.

This poem is a great introduction to concrete poems because it's a simple and obvious shape that corresponds directly to the subject of the poem.  The language, made-up words, rhythm, and rhyme also make it an entertaining choice.

I would share the poem directly from the book to expose students to the shape and illustration.  Further concrete examples could also be shared from the collection.  After reading "Popsicle" and engaging students in some discussion of how shape and placement of a poem can add meaning just as much as word choice, I would encourage students to experiment with shape, font, and illustration of their own poems.