The First Part Last by Angela Johnson

Johnson, A. (2003). The first part last. New York: Simon & Schuster Books for Young Readers.  

Bobby is a teenage father living in New York City.  He tells his story of life with his newborn daughter Feather and the countless ways that his life is transformed by her existence.  The responsibility of caring for a child at such a young age while still balancing school, family, friends, and decisions about the future is daunting, but Bobby is determined to make the right decisions for his daughter and their future together.

            The novel begins just a few days after Bobby brings Feather home from the hospital.  The chapters alternate between the first few months of her life and flashback descriptions that begin with the day that Bobby’s girlfriend Nia tells him of her pregnancy.  The two timelines blend to create a story that keeps the reader engaged.  Although it’s obvious in one sense where the “Then” chapters are leading since the reader knows from the “Now” story line that Bobby is raising Feather with support but little direct assistance from his parents, it becomes clear early in the novel that both timelines are building towards a climax that the reader may not expect.  The narrative style is episodic in nature, describing key events that lead to future consequences as well as conversations, interactions, or reflections that are representative of the relationships among the characters.  

            Bobby’s narrative voice seems authentic, conveying the fear and confusion alongside his determination and love for his daughter.  He is frank about the realities he faces in raising a child alone, conveying both the resentment he secretly feels about losing his own childhood and the tender devotion and amazement he feels at Feather’s existence.  The novel reads a bit like poetry.  The language is sparse in places but very powerful and descriptive.

            There is foreshadowing leading up to the conclusions of both timelines that connect then and now into one linear story, but Bobby’s final decision about his and Feather’s future may still seem shocking or even unrealistic to readers, especially after the realistic way that Bobby has been portrayed throughout most of the book.  Eve with this slightly incongruous ending, the result  

is a powerful novel.